Date: July 13, 2015 5:26 pm Title: Prologue
Wow really great idea! Gosh I felt horrible when poor buzz got hurt that episode :( but I like the twist in this and I'm excited to see where it goes! :)
Author's Response: I really like dealing with what-ifs. Ideas that are outside the specific events of the actual episodes are fine, but changing the outcomes of those events intrigues me. Because you already have the base of the character's thoughts and feelings, and then you get to crush them. At least that's what I like to do :D I felt bad about Buzz too, but at least he didn't get hurt too bad. Shawn, on the other hand...Yin took him. No telling what will happen (no, really, I haven't got much of a plan. I have one thing, but I haven't figured out what I want it to lead to yet.). Thanks for reviewing!
Date: July 13, 2015 5:23 pm Title: Chapter One
I can't wait to read what happens next, I think the changes you've made to the original story work really well :)
Author's Response: Thank you :) I think that I've always felt that Shawn really did want to pick Abigail up himself. When he first says he has to pick her up, he seems to really want to do it, but then the Chief says that McNab will do it and he just totally accepts it. But then I rewatched it and I was just like "what if Shawn picked her up" and I got to writing.
Date: July 02, 2015 9:04 pm Title: Prologue
Very well done twist on Mr. Yin Presents. I've always wondered if Shawn harbored any feelings of guilt about choosing Abby over Juliet?
Author's Response: Yeah, it shows him wanting to pick her up, but he lets Buzz go so he can be there for Juliet. But I wanted to see the other side of logic come out victorious, which is preventing the other from getting into danger rather than saving the one that already is.
Date: June 26, 2015 8:04 pm Title: Prologue
Ooooh, great start!!!
Author's Response: Haha, thank you :) I'm not entirely sure where I'm going with this. All I had was "what if Shawn picked Abigail up". Plus I sort of rushed writing this because, as I said, I wanted to try posting from my phone. But I'll try to do something good after this prologue.