Date: December 29, 2017 8:59 pm Title: For Redwolffclaw
I just had to say, I absolutely *loved* reading this one. The first scene is my favorite! Baby Wolfy Shawn is just too cute, and I thought it was so funny when Henry told him that his little baby bites didn't hurt! :-D
I also love it that Gus' scary story is about a bill. That's just SO Gus. :-D
Another favorite line:
Did you know that lobsters can pee out of their antenna?”
I actually did laugh out loud over that one! Of course that's something Gus would say when a bad guy tells him to talk. :-D
Chocolate is poisonous to dogs - I mean, wolves - I’ll give you a really bad tummyache, so please just leave me alone-”
OF COURSE Gus is trying to reason with it, and of course he's using science! :-D
Great job, Koohii! Just hilarious.
Author's Response: Thank you! *tackle hugs* I actually wrote the Baby Wolf scene ages ago and I just didn't know what to do with it until the challenge came along. XP Gus's story I totally had to wing on the spot and that was really fun, because I was trying to be creepy in the middle of something happy and I had to change moods really fast XDD I just found some dark, creepy music and put it on repeat, then as soon as the section was done I switched back to happy music. It actually really helped XD I knew that Gus needed a random fact, and that was just the first one that popped into my head! XD Pretty much all of Gus's lines I improvised on the spot. I'm so glad they made you laugh! ^^
Date: December 28, 2017 6:37 pm Title: For Redwolffclaw
Thank you again for this awesome gift! Everything about it is so Psych. The end part where Gus has one of his running away conversations with Shawn was incredibly funny.
Savior Shawn too! Plus the fact he tried to reassure Gus that he didn't kill them. ROFL.
This whole thing is pure gold.
Author's Response: I'm beaming~! ^^ I'm so, so glad you like it! I had the most fantastic time making this for you. It was my first gift fic and I loved taking your guidelines and playing around with them! Supernatural Shawn, by the way, is a gold mine. There are sooooo many wonderful ways you can take it and I got a lot of ideas out of it that I can *maybe* use in the future, so thank you so much for that! P.S. I totally adore the idea of Wolf Shawn and I'd totally write more of it! ^^
Author's Response: I'm beaming! ^^ I'm so, so happy you like it, and I really had a fantastic time making it for you! I loved using your guidelines and I got a TON of ideas from them that I can *maybe* use in the future, so thank you for that~! Supernatural Shawn just has so many possibilities and fun/interesting themes to chase! I totally love Wolf Shawn and I might even write him again~ X3 Thank you thank you thank you for everything!
Date: December 28, 2017 1:17 pm Title: For Redwolffclaw
*cough* Somebody 'round here forgot to leave a rating too... Who could that be? *glares around*
*casually drops stars*
LOOK THERE THEY GO!
Author's Response: *face falls* Aww, I wanted to hug them . . .
Date: December 27, 2017 8:41 am Title: For Redwolffclaw
Kudos on the great fic!! I love how you kept to the Psych humor that we all know and love while still working in your recipient's request for a supernatural element.
"Gus screamed, suddenly realized that everybody else had stopped screaming and shooting, and then screamed some more."
I have to say, even though I feel bad for him, scared Gus is so funny! And how he reasons that the wolf shouldn't eat him because chocolate is bad for dogs!! *dying of laughter*
Great job, you!!
Author's Response: Aww~! *hugs* Thanks a million for the kind review and (of course) for your help in planning the story! I really couldn't have done it without you ^^ Also, I'm glad you liked my humor, because sometimes when I read my own work I start laughing at myself for being such an idiot XDD Sometimes I just don't know what the heck is happening in my brain . . . XP
Date: December 26, 2017 4:55 pm Title: For Redwolffclaw
Okay, I adored this - so sweet, funny and Psych-ish - and with the most adorable dash of supernatural! Tiny wolfy Shawn is positively delightful, and I can't stop imagine all the wonderful sheninegans that could come from a werewolf!Shawn: Gus cuddling with his furry best friend, Wolf-Shawn letting Jules petting the hell out of his soft tufted ears, maybe following his two favorite detectives into some extra-dangerous mission and jumping in front of the random thug snarling and hellbent on protecting his pack...I love the tiny, bright world you pictured here, Thank you so, so much - you really brightened my day
Author's Response: Thank you so much! ^^ To be really honest, I'm actually maybe just a bit jealous of your writing and your stories, so a review from you is a fantastic honor for me! (I'm grinning like an idiot, no joke XD) Thank you for brightening my day~! And Merry Christmas! ^^